平和雙語英文寫作歷年原題分析

今天，我要給大家繼續分析平和入學考試，英文寫作這一單項！我會從試題文章出發，對考查形式和考試要點等方面進行拆解，詳細分析平和英語寫作的考察要求。

話不多說，我們一起來看原文：

01、Students should be allowed to have a boyfriend or a girlfriend? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Why?

寫作難點

1. 清晰的思路。該話題雖然屬于社會熱點話題，但是從論點上來說，依然屬于比較難寫的話題之一。所以寫之前需要有一個清晰的思路和框架；

2. 根據題目中的要求，該題目難以寫正反兩面。一邊倒的寫法，不是很容易寫夠字數要求；

3. 該話題的專業詞匯有限，平常也不經常用英語來討論此類文章，所以詞匯量是難點之一。

寫作思路

1.題目中問的是should be allowed。那么，在task response這一點里，就嚴格要求學生回答should or should not。最好是一邊倒的結構，這樣能更加切題；

2.這道題大多數人會寫不同意，如果我們反向思維寫同意觀點，可以很容易從人群中突出來，同意的理由則包括：

1）學習有動力

2）培養獨立，責任感

關鍵詞匯

培養：Develop, cultivate, foster

培養/保持動力：keep them motivated， be more motivated，become motivated

獨立性的培養：development the independence

培養責任心：responsibility is developed

教育家：educationalists

更有效的：more effective

減少分神：reduces distraction

情感上成熟的：emotionally mature

敏感的：sensitive

親密的：intimate

02、Nowadays, there are many high-techproducts, such as mobile phone, automatic devices. If you have to abandon one of them, which one will you choose to？Why?

寫作難點

1.放棄一個高科技產品的好處約等于使用一個高科技產品的壞處。寫缺點不容易；

2.科技類寫作詞匯。

寫作思路

1.可以寫放棄一個科技產品的缺點，再寫其他沒有放棄的產品的優點；

2.選擇放棄的科技產品的缺點；

3.已經過時了，很多功能被其他產品代替；對人們產生了負面的影響；

4.沒有放棄的科技產品的優點；

5.功能更加先進，帶來的正面的影響要遠大于放棄的這個產品。

關鍵詞匯

高科技: cutting- edge technologies

正面影響：have many positives

負面影響：have many negatives

代替：substitute

過時：obsolete

先進：advanced

拓展知識：broaden their knowledge about

促進大腦發育：boost their brain development

變得更有創造力：become more creative

提高社交能力：Improve their social skills

緊密地合作：work closely with

03、Write a short essay about your viewson western festivals. Should we celebrate western festivals?

寫作難點

對西方文化的不熟悉，導致很難寫出中西節日文化的對比。

寫作思路

從全球化的角度入手，討論慶祝多文化節日的優點：

1. 現在是全球化的時代，所以我們應該歡迎他國文化；

2. 學習西方文化可以更好的促進與西方文明的交流；

3. 學習西方文化可以更好的幫助我們理解我們自己的文化。

關鍵詞匯

protect their heritage: 保護他們的文化傳承

threaten traditional lifestyles 對傳統的生活方式構成威脅

are more open-minded? 心態更開放

respect cultural differences? 尊重文化差異

have more creative ideas 更有創意

have different values and lifestyles 有不同的價值觀和生活方式

build understanding and trust 建立理解和相互信任

connect us to the past 幫助我們了解過去

enrich the local culture 豐富當地的文化

contribute to the local economy 為當地的經濟做貢獻

the expansion of international companies 跨國公司的擴張

04、Now children spend a lot of timeplaying computer games and little time doing sports, why is this? Do you thinkit is a negative or positive development?

寫作難點

1.先要討論這一現象的原因，常識性的話題，往往很難寫出具體的原因；

2.討論利弊的時候，需要直接表達自己的觀點，而不是寫成兩邊倒的議論文。

寫作思路

1. 學生們主要任務是學習知識，考慮到孩子們的自律性較差，允許孩子們玩游戲容易使他們分散精力，耽誤學習；

2. 過度沉迷游戲有害健康，具體而言，玩家會視力下降，養成懶惰和久坐的習慣，導致很多身體健康方面的疾病；

3. 很多游戲里面有少兒不宜的游戲內容。

關鍵詞匯

invariably ensue? 接踵而來

conduct anti-social offenses 做出反社會行為

study be delayed 學習被耽誤

study efficiency 學習效率

learning-oriented games 以學習為導向的游戲

beneficiary of online games 在線游戲的受益者

adverse impact 負面影響

physically detrimental 有害健康

indulge in games 沉迷游戲

excessive game time 長時間玩游戲

from the perspective of health 從健康角度而言

05?James' classmates laugh at him. Write a mail to comfort him.

寫作難點

有時候，不好的事情會發生在我們身上。當我們聽聞別人身上發生了不幸的事時，就應該表達我們的同情。當我們想表達自己的擔憂時，可能會比較難，但是也不要讓自己陷得很突兀。

寫作思路

1.先表示自己難過的心情；

2.站在自己的角度去描述被嘲笑的這件事情，其實并不是糟糕的；

3.給予祝福和陪伴。

關鍵詞匯

I'm sorry to hear about 聽到......我很難過

please accept my .... 請接受我的.....

that's so sad? 這真令人難過

I hope things get better soon? 希望一切都會盡快好起來

I hope you feel better soon 希望你盡快好來

Is it better for students learn at homewith easy accessibility to more advanced technologies in education, such as TV,self-improvement exercise, and internet?

優秀作文展示

看完原題之后，讓我們一起來看一下我們F同學的作文！經過智思的專業訓練后，你也可以寫出這樣的作文呦~

題目：Is it better for students learn at home with easy accessibility to more advanced technologies in education, such as TV, self-improvement exercise, and internet?

文章：

It is widely believed that it is better for students to learn at home with easy accessibility to more advanced technologies in education because studying at home with advanced equipment is very convenient to teenagers. Unfortunately, this opinion tells us part of the truth. From my point of view, learning at education institution is more effective to students.

In my first analysis, by face-to-facelearning, students can communicate with the teachers better, which means that they have a good command of knowledge. For example, if the student is confused about points how to calculate the area of a given triangle, he is able to ask the teacher for help in time and the teacher will explain it again. That is to say, the student is more likely to understand the point completely. In addition, when students meet some problems such as how to write the introductory paragraph of an article, he can find the teacher directly and is told that a refined introduction first needs the vivid description of a given phenomenon. Generally speaking, after studying for some time, the students’academic performance ought to be raised.

In my second opinion, through face-to-face communication, students can be administrated by the teacher, which results in that their studying efficiency will be promised. For instance, when it is the time for students to study, the teacher will take their mobile phones away in order to prevent them from playing games. This leads to a result that students will pay more attention to doing homework, reciting words, and writing acomposition. Nevertheless, if the students study at home with advanced facilities, no one can supervise them. That is to say, their learning efficiency is low. As a result, studying at education institution can ensure the learning efficiency.

In a word, based on two reasons I listed above, I consider that it is better for students to study at places like school. For one thing, it can raise their school performance; for another thing, learning efficiency can be guaranteed.

總結

從以上題目以及分析可以看出，題目的形式類似于托福雅思，但是題目的難度、要求、以及考察方向是不同的，比如學校是否可以有男女朋友，這樣的題目較多涉及中學的生活學習。但是國際備考涉及到的邏輯思路以及詞匯要求是遠高于中考作文的。綜合來看，備考平和雙語學校的寫作，需要針對題目進行針對性準備。正確的備考國際學校寫作的方法，是應該有目標導向的去學習練習。